Poetry Thursday: An Open Window

Here’s my entry for the final Poetry Thursday. This week prompt is “an open window.”

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There is a boundary
to our emotions
for if left unchecked
won’t it overwhelm us
completely?
Who wouldn’t want to be engulfed
in love,
the euphoria
of the tenderness, the
sensation of desires
awakened
energizing, stimulating
arousing?
For all of the emotions
imprisoned within us,
the pent up anger
the repressed hatred
the tainted jealousy
the blinding faith
the guiding hope
all are
an open window
to your inner self…
your soul.
Look then
into your soul
and find
your true form.
Look then
not for perfection, but
learn to attained
a balance
a beloved form.

by : Joezul 

 



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20 Comments

  1. Crafty Green Poet on 30.08.2007 at 16:18 (Reply)

    very true

  2. gautami on 30.08.2007 at 16:25 (Reply)

    “Look then
    into your soul
    and find
    your true form.”

    I agree but how many of us do that?

  3. jesse on 30.08.2007 at 18:16 (Reply)

    yes, the world would be a better place if we all found our true form ! This poem is truly Joezul at his very best.It left me breathless……

  4. paisley on 30.08.2007 at 19:57 (Reply)

    balance is so often over looked as a bringer of joy… but it is indeed the great content-er

  5. Constance on 30.08.2007 at 21:16 (Reply)

    Very philosophical, I like it! :)

  6. lisrobbe on 30.08.2007 at 23:46 (Reply)

    Insightful. I could relate as I am in the process of finding my true form.

  7. Tumblewords on 31.08.2007 at 01:33 (Reply)

    Balance is not so easy. Your words are thought provoking and memory jogging.

  8. This Girl Remembers on 31.08.2007 at 02:21 (Reply)

    Lovely and provocative. Thank you for sharing this with us!

    1. joezul on 30.08.2007 at 16:37 (Reply)

      ’tis human nature… :)

  9. Christine on 31.08.2007 at 06:17 (Reply)

    :cool: I l;ive your poem every day, I think, trying to feel what I feel as a way to connect with Self.

  10. ...deb on 31.08.2007 at 11:40 (Reply)

    I like how you’ve set your point on those last two lines.

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